Don't be to critical to this, it's my first try.

INTRODUCTION

It all started last year, 2009, i think that was the real outbreak, atleast, for our city that is... It was on the news, they talked about it. Most people thought it would be controled by the end of this year. But then strange things happened around my town. People started dissapearing. Police reports that were published said that this has nothing to do with the new disease. So did i... I whish i should've known better then that. Now it is time to show what i can do. First of all i found several descriptions of the behaviour of the "zeds":
They are more around during the night, and don't see very well, but this doesn't mean that they can't hear me. Further they are mostly slow but i've seen them running. So i don't think they are very slow. It is better that they don't come to close so i should try to use ranged weapons if i have enough ammo. I know from experience that they have a distinctive smell. Just getting a small pinch of the odour of rotting flesh makes my stomach go around. And it is even worse during the day.

Hmmm well let's start the story anyway...

CHARACTER

Oh did i forget to introduce myself? Sorry for that. The name's Raymond Edwin, but friends call me Ray. Born in 1982, at the Windy City. Still used to live there untill the "Things" happened. Used to work as a Risk and Insurance Manager. And no, i didn't think that this unfortunate risk would ever happen. In my freetime i don't do very much so don't think i will be able to always safe myself out of difficult situations...

EQUIPMENT (Begin Day 1)

Ranged Weapon/Gun: NONE (0 ammo)
Mellee Weapon: NONE
Armour: NONE (0% Damaged)
Food: NONE
Health: 80% (Head injury)
Stamina: 100%
Hunger: 100%
Misc. Items: Toyota Supra Keys, Keys of the Appartement, Mobile phone.

IT BEGINS

Day 1, 20 October 2009, 05:00AM, Chicago, Illinois, Your appartement.

2827202 Alive
563 Infected (At this hour 75% zombie activity)
8983 Dead

You wake up lying on the ground in your house, grunting a little, you try to actually wake up and stand up.

You: How did i get on the floor? I don't remember having a party..... aaaagh my head hurts!

Voice: Ah finnaly, i thought you'd never wake up.

You: Huh who are you? And what do you mean, it's only five in the morning damn it. Do you know why my head hurts so much?

Voice: You tripped when they tried to grab you. I dragged you to your place, found the address in your wallet.

You: Who are you talking about? Did you steal my wallet?

Voice: *Sigh* No... And i mean the Zombies... Don't you remember?

You: Not really...

Voice: Well i guess you must have hit the floor a lil' too hard. Grab some food if there's anything we got to go soon.

You: But wait? Zombies? Is this some kind of joke?

Voice: Do you think it is?

You: Well seeming that my head hurts it could've been a really bad hangover.

Voice: Just hurry up okay?

You: Fine, what's your name by the way?

Mallorie: My name's Mallorie.

You: Nice to meet you Mallorie.

After this short discussion you look around in the room for food. All you find is a can of soft drink and a chocolate bar. You get out of your room and go to mallorie, Who is waiting in the kitchen. She seems to be a pretty tough girl, carrying a very nice FN-FiveseveN.

Mallorie: You got any weapons around here? We're going to need more then this. I only got one magazine left.

You: No, not really.

Mallorie: Well then you're going to have to improvise.

Mallorie throws you a kitchen knife. You catch it.

You: Thanks.

Mallorie: Don't thank me it's yours.

You: Well you know what i...

Mallorie: Like i said no time for chit chat they could be here any moment.

You: Who?

Mallorie: Duh, the zeds.

You: Oh yeah right... Let's hurry then my Supra is down in the garage.

Mallorie: You drive a Supra that's nice.

You: Yep, it's my favorite car.

Just when you two try to get out of the appartement you hear something bonking on the door.

You: I guess that's them, sounds like there is more then one.

Mallorie: It seems we are going to have to beat them to get out of here.

You: Or we could hide.

You have the choice, you are now in the living room and have a couch, chair or bookcase to put infront of the door. You can also try to hide, hoping that the zombies won't find you. Or you try to just shoot them all.

CHOOSE: (2 Options will lead to death)

A. Block the door and find another way out, there should be airshafts around here. (Reply with an object that you choose to put infront of the door)

B. Hide, hoping that the zombies won't find you. (Reply with where to hide)

C. Attack the zombies when they break trough.

D. [insert epic plan here]

EQUIPMENT (Day 1 First Plan)

1# RAYMOND EDWIN

Ranged Weapon/Gun: NONE (0 ammo)
Mellee Weapon: Kitchen Knife
Armour: NONE (0% Damaged)
Food: One Chocolate bar, One can of soft drink.
Health: 81% (Head Injury, is healing)
Stamina: 99%
Hunger: 99%
Misc. Items: Toyota Supra Keys, Keys of the Appartement, Mobile phone.

2# MALLORIE STEWARDS

Ranged Weapon/Gun: FN-FiveseveN (20 Rounds/1 Magazine/5.7x28mm)
Mellee Weapon: Swiss Army Knife
Armour: NONE (0% Damaged)
Food: Candy Bar, Bottle of water, A few apples, Bread.
Health: 100%
Stamina: 99%
Hunger: 99%
Misc. Items: Paperclip, A Pen
Morale: 100%
Relation: 1%

Floor Plan Of Your Appartement:

A

Best cyoa ever, but a bit formal.

A. sound pretty resonable

and by the way shift get off my back

A. And he's not on your back, as proved here once you managed to post somehtng decent. He was like that to me when I first started, although my grammar was better.

A. good...i cant insult it but i cant say its perfect still i'll probably be around for most of it

I must say wow. I didn't expect to get so many replies on my first time. Thanks all for posting it does give me more morale to continue working on it. The next part is coming soon. Thanks for giving the feedback epicsandwhich101. Your grammar is better because your from the UK. I will post the next part soon. The answer is A.

PLAN A:

AND SO IT CONTINUES

Day 1, 20 October 2009, 05:09AM, Chicago, Illinois, Your appartement.

2823275 Alive
749 Infected (At this hour 75% Zombie activity)
12713 Dead

You: I got an idea, we should block the door and try to get out trough the vents.

Mallorie: Hmmm, sounds fine to me.

You: Come over here and help me with this bookcase.

You and Mallorie push the bookcase infront of the door.

You: There, that should buy us some time. If i am correct the vents should be right here.

You open the door to the Closet, remove some boards and put them infront of the bookcase. Then you remove the vent from the wall.

You: It's a tight fit, but i think this might work out.

Mallorie: Here take these bags, should help us to carry some stuff around.

You: good idea.

You throw the bags in to the vents then you climb in it.

You: Keep the zombies busy while i try to climb in.

Mallorie: Sure, just hurry up ok. We don't have much time.

You and mallorie can hear that more zombies are pushing and bonking agains the door forcing it to move a few inches every time.

You: Ok i'm in now it's your turn.

Mallorie is running to the closet when suddenly a zombie sticks it's arm trough the gap and grabs her.

Mallorie: Oh no you don't, Stupid zed sh*t!

Mallorie grabs her gun and shoots the zombie in the arm, the zombie lets go. Then she quickly climbs into the vent.

You: Ok let's hurry. We dont have much time until they break trough.

Mallorie: Listen.

You listen, you don't hear the zombie bonking on the door instead they moved away from the door. But you hear a man screaming. You recognize the voice.

You: Jim is that you? Get the hell out of there!

But it's to late the zombies got Jim and are now taring his body apart. And Start to feast on him.

You: Damn it he was a good friend of mine. They will pay for that!

As you two move trough the vents. You can hear amplified shouts and screams from different room, knowing that these people were less fortunate. You stumble upon the elevator shaft.

You: Ok let's climb down here. it should be easy since it's only a couple of floors down.

Mallorie: We should be carefull though. Power is still online the elevators could still be running.

You: If so who would be using them most of the people here are either dead or trapped. But if you want ill go first.

You and Mallorie climb down the ladder. Luckily when you arive at the next floor still no elevator has past.

You: Still a few floors to go.

Mallorie: So far, so good.

You and mallorie made it to the bottom floor. The elevator appears to be stopped somehow. You open the vent on top of it and climb in.

You: Well i see why it wasn't moving.

The security guard of the Appartement building lies dead on the elevator floor his leg blocking the elevator door to close.

Mallorie: Damn what all hapenned here. It wasn't like this when i dragged you into your Appartement.

You: It seems to be spreading fast.

You and Mallorie walk into the lobby. You see that someone is hiding behind the counter. You nudge Mallorie and whisper to Mallorie what to do.

You: Should we try to help?

Mallorie: What if it is a zombie?

You I don't know and i can't see it from here either. You have the choice to approach it, let Mallorie approach it or both. Or you can just leave it.

CHOOSE: (2 Options will lead to death)

A. Approach the person and see if he, or she is alright.

B. Let Mallorie aproach.

C. Both approach.

D. Leave it be.

E. [insert epic plan here]

1# RAYMOND EDWIN

Ranged Weapon/Gun: NONE (0 ammo)
Mellee Weapon: Kitchen Knife
Armour: NONE (0% Damaged)
Food: One Chocolate bar, One can of soft drink.
Health: 82% (Head Injury, is healing)
Stamina: 97%
Hunger: 97%
Misc. Items: Toyota Supra Keys, Keys of the Appartement, Mobile phone.

2# MALLORIE STEWARDS

Ranged Weapon/Gun: FN-FiveseveN (19 Rounds/1 Magazine/5.7x28mm)
Mellee Weapon: Swiss Army Knife
Armour: NONE (0% Damaged)
Food: Candy Bar, Bottle of water, A few apples, Bread.
Health: 99%
Stamina: 96%
Hunger: 97%
Misc. Items: Paperclip, A Pen
Morale: 97%
Relation: 2%

E: EPIC BATTLE PLAN!

Your in a lobby, and I'm going to guess that there is going to be some vases around.

Ask the person if hes alright, and if no response, use your epic skills to throw the vase behind the counter and hit the culprit on the head.

Option E #2: Shout if to ask if they are bitten. Tell them you have a gun. I don't know how fast your zeds will move, so find a long solid object, maybe a tall pot plant, to give you better melee range. Have Mallorie coveer you.

Your english isn't bad. I know a guy who's lived here for seventy years, and I can understand french better than him. He's a bit of a stereotypical Devonian farmer.

I used a random number generator for the result: It will be option 2.

And thanks for saying my english is good, i have pretty good grades for English at school and there arent many in my class which are as good as me (if there are any)

I will post the next part soon.